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Excerpt from Solemnly Swear
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I’d rather be flipping burgers.

It was an amazing thought considering Bobby Mann hated his burger job. He hadn’t wanted to be selected for a jury, but when he had, he’d tried to think positively about it. Maybe it wouldn’t be so bad. After all, he loved watching “Law & Order” and “CSI” on TV. He loved the forensic stuff and the give and take of the lawyers against the witnesses, especially when the lawyers made them break and tell stuff they didn’t want to tell.

He hoped that would happen during this case—a murder case. The defendant, Patti McCoy, was a kitchen worker at a local resort. She was accused of killing her boyfriend, Brett Lerner, the restaurant’s maitre d’, while he sat in a hot tub in his backyard. She hit him over the head with a wine bottle. Allegedly hit him. Or pushed him under. Or something.

The whole thing sounded pretty fishy, with good potential to hold Bobby’s interest.

But so far, it had been boring. If he was bored this bad on the first day...

He found himself admiring the courtroom. The room was probably built in the 1930’s when budgets allowed craftsmen to paint the mural that swept the wall behind the judge: rolling hills and upright people, standing together with their chins held high as they searched for justice. The budget had also included intricate wrought iron chandeliers that hung from a tin-roofed ceiling. The windows were high, letting in light but no view. There would be no distraction from the job at hand. At least not on their account.

But what impressed Bobby the most was the woodwork. The massive mountain of oak that raised the judge on a level above the rest of them was set off by layers of fluted trim topped with carved corners. The half-wall separating the lawyers from the spectators, and the jury from the rest of the courtroom, was created with large curved spindles beneath a massive rail. I can make spindles like that on my lathe . . .

The chairs were also oak, yet were surprisingly comfortable because they had armrests and were designed to curve around a person’s back. They were classic. Timeless. He made a quick sketch on his note pad.

Maybe this wouldn’t be a total waste of time.

**

The prosecutor could have been hired by central casting. Abigail had seen his type in dozens of productions: a striking man skirting the edge of handsome who made up for his lack of hunky looks through his commanding manner, immaculate grooming, and impeccable taste. He wore an expensive coal-gray suit, white starched shirt, cerulean blue tie, and polished oxfords.

Actually, the color of the tie was unexpected. The standard dress for a conservative man-in-power would have dictated maroon. This flash of individuality piqued Abigail’s interest, making her pay more attention to the man—and his words—rather than less.

As intended?

She wouldn’t doubt it. Lawyers were like that. Just as the ideal theatre set did not contain a single prop that wasn’t vital to the story, a savvy lawyer thought through every detail of his production—the trial. Visual or audible, everything was taken into account in an attempt to predict a response. An outcome. A verdict in their favor.

The prosecutor’s name was also in his favor: Jonathan Cummings. Very authoritative and persuasive. The man wouldn’t have had the same impact if his name had been Jon. Or especially John. What’s in a name?

Plenty.

Abigail looked at the defendant. Patti. With an i not a y. By the looks of her, Abigail guessed Patti signed her name with a little heart to dot the i. It was hard to believe she was capable of murder.

And yet, by what Cummings was saying...

“... will prove that Patti Jo McCoy had both the motive and the opportunity to take the life of her lover, Brett Lerner. Hers was a motive that is timeless and transcends all segments and sections of society.” He paused in the middle of the courtroom and turned toward Patti, managing a look that conveyed both pity and scorn. “Unmarried. Alone. She was carrying his child, with Brett, the unwilling father.”

Abigail looked at Patti, watching for her reaction. The girl didn’t try to hide her condition by looking ashamed; or ignore it by staring straight ahead. Patti put a hand on her abdomen.

Ah. A love child. If that tidbit of information had been in the news, Abigail had missed it. A love child and the heel who wouldn’t marry her.

Abigail knew she shouldn’t jump to such conclusions before the case was made. And yet... life was revealed in the details. One hand placed lovingly on one belly...

Cummings continued with a list of the evidence against little Patti: “The state will show through eye-witness accounts that Ms. McCoy was at the murder scene. Through fingerprint evidence we will show she touched the murder weapon. And we will reveal, through a neighbor’s testimony, that upon killing her lover, she screamed in shock at her own actions. Overcome by guilt, she then ran away.”

Guilty as charged. Case closed. Can I go home now?

Abigail was shocked by how quickly these thoughts appeared. She’d always prided herself with having an open mind.

But also a logical one. If there was hard evidence...

Poor little thing. As it stood now, Patti Jo McCoy was toast.

**

Ken Doolittle pinched a piece of lint from his khakis and let it fall to the ground between his chair and the chair of his fellow-juror, Jack, the car-guy. Jack slowly turned his head and watched it fall, then looked at Ken as if he’d just witnessed something offensive.

Ken hoped their seating order wasn’t set in stone because the thought of looking at Jack’s grease-stained fingernails day after day... to tick Jack off, Ken plucked another—invisible—piece of lint from his pants and let it fly between them. Bug off, buddy.

Ken realized he hadn’t been listening to the defense attorney’s opening statement. Not that he was missing much. Stan Stadler was no more impressive than his defendant. Ken would bet his Ping driver the man was a public defender. Stan was a good hundred pounds overweight and carried the majority of the fat in front. With no backside, he was constantly hitching up his pants, which balanced under his belly with gravity a constant enemy.

Stadler had made an attempt to slick his dark hair back, but it rebelled, leaving strays shooting from his head at odd angles as if the wisps didn’t want to be associated with this obvious bad hair day. And when the man wasn’t rescuing his pants, he was pushing his aviator-shaped glasses further up his nose—which was the only skinny thing about him. Actually, when Ken thought about it, he realized the nose might be the only body part not affected by fat. Interesting.

With a deep intake of breath, Stadler wound things up. “The defense will show that the defendant, Patti McCoy, did not kill Brett Lerner.” With a nod to the jury, Stadler returned to his chair.

That was it?

Patti looked hopeful.

Ken was not impressed.

**

Deidre Kelly was determined to soak in every word of the trial’s opening statements. Sig would want a play-by-play that evening. When Deidre had been chosen for this particular trial... they’d both agreed it was an amazing twist of fate.

She was glad the judge had said they could take notes because Deidre had trouble remembering three items to get at the store without writing them down. She was no Abigail Buchanan—who seemed to be taking it all in but wasn’t writing down a thing.

The defendant, Patti, was a bitty thing who could have benefited from some beauty parlor expertise. There was some natural beauty present, but with her minimal makeup, washed out lips, and dull hair pulled back in a ponytail, Patti blended into the background, a prop as unremarkable as other items that occupied the defendant’s table: as inconsequential as her lawyer’s briefcase, a manila folder, a yellow legal pad, or a pitcher of water.

Patti’s job as a dishwasher at The Pines restaurant at the Country Comfort Resort and Spa was not a stretch. Patti was someone Deidre would have glimpsed through the kitchen door without really looking at her, an invisible service employee like those she’d come into contact with a hundred times. There, but not there. Although Patti had not spoken aloud as yet (would she be allowed to testify?) Deidre guessed her voice would be soft. “You’ll have to speak up, Ms. McCoy...”

Yes indeed. The girl would have to speak up if she was going to be acquitted of this murder charge. But if Patti didn’t take the rap, who would?

Deidre knew justice was occasionally fooled or interrupted, but it was rarely completely blocked. Justice was relentless.

The truth would come out.

Deidre shivered.


Copyright 2007, Nancy Moser,
published by Tyndale House Publishers


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